Zephyrin
Roleplayer 
10th Division Captain
"Servitas Vitae, be seeing you."
Posts: 14 
Race: Shinigami
Tier: E-1
Reiatsu: Strong
Seishin: 10
Budo: 20
Heiki: 20
Koudu: 60
Hoho: 15
Soul Shards: -450
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Post by Zephyrin on Feb 24, 2013 22:47:07 GMT -5
Power Type: Shikai Power Name: Kendodiro Spirit: Werewolf Inner World: Barren desert at night Release Command: "Control the shadows." Description: Zephyrin's black sword, Kendodiro, duplicates creating two identical blades. Both Zephyrin and the swords become cloaked in black energy that appears like fire. In this form Zephyrin can make nearby shadows into a physical form and attack with them in a variety of ways. Parameter Bonuses: Hoho 20%
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Post by Okuma on Feb 24, 2013 23:40:55 GMT -5
Power Approved.
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Zephyrin
Roleplayer
10th Division Captain
"Servitas Vitae, be seeing you."
Posts: 14
Race: Shinigami
Tier: E-1
Reiatsu: Strong
Seishin: 10
Budo: 20
Heiki: 20
Koudu: 60
Hoho: 15
Soul Shards: -450
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Post by Zephyrin on Feb 25, 2013 18:43:58 GMT -5
Ability Name: Shadow: Offense Power/Parameter: Shikai Flavor Description: Using nearby shadows which are absorbed into Zephyrin's Zanpakto, they are used to attack opponents in physical form such as shockwaves, projectiles or more powerful attacks, each varying in power. Mechanical Description: 20% Budo Drawback: Absorbing shadows has a varying charge time based on the power of the following attacks. 3 turn cooldown if used while moving. One while stationary. Read more: bleachrp.boards.net/thread/8/ability-template#ixzz2LxOoP5Gg |
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Post by Okuma on Feb 25, 2013 19:51:27 GMT -5
So you use the shadows to attack your opponent physically? Just wanna make sure I understand this right.
For your drawback, I have a simple idae.
3 turn cooldown if you move. 1 turn cooldown if you don't move. This means you can't dodge, you have to stand your ground against attacks, but since that can be dangerous, I think it balances it out.
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Zephyrin
Roleplayer
10th Division Captain
"Servitas Vitae, be seeing you."
Posts: 14
Race: Shinigami
Tier: E-1
Reiatsu: Strong
Seishin: 10
Budo: 20
Heiki: 20
Koudu: 60
Hoho: 15
Soul Shards: -450
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Post by Zephyrin on Feb 25, 2013 21:10:16 GMT -5
Alright that's a good idea i'll edit it in. And yes it does strike physically.
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Post by Okuma on Feb 25, 2013 22:49:54 GMT -5
All right Cap'n, it's approved.
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Zephyrin
Roleplayer
10th Division Captain
"Servitas Vitae, be seeing you."
Posts: 14
Race: Shinigami
Tier: E-1
Reiatsu: Strong
Seishin: 10
Budo: 20
Heiki: 20
Koudu: 60
Hoho: 15
Soul Shards: -450
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Post by Zephyrin on Feb 26, 2013 16:41:02 GMT -5
Ability Name:Shadow:Defence Power/Parameter:Shikai Flavor Description:Using nearby shadows, Zephyrin can block incoming projectiles using walls of physical darkness. Mechanical Description:20% Koudu Drawback: Barriers can break depending on the power of the projectile and the amount of shadows used to put the barriers up. Adds a fatigue counter upon usage and for every turn the barrier is up 1 more is added. Read more: bleachrp.boards.net/thread/8/ability-template#ixzz2M2l86nAa
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Post by Okuma on Feb 26, 2013 22:50:43 GMT -5
This seems balanced enough. Approved.
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Zephyrin
Roleplayer
10th Division Captain
"Servitas Vitae, be seeing you."
Posts: 14
Race: Shinigami
Tier: E-1
Reiatsu: Strong
Seishin: 10
Budo: 20
Heiki: 20
Koudu: 60
Hoho: 15
Soul Shards: -450
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Post by Zephyrin on Feb 27, 2013 17:29:07 GMT -5
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Post by Okuma on Feb 28, 2013 11:04:47 GMT -5
Very cool. Bankai approved.
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Zephyrin
Roleplayer
10th Division Captain
"Servitas Vitae, be seeing you."
Posts: 14
Race: Shinigami
Tier: E-1
Reiatsu: Strong
Seishin: 10
Budo: 20
Heiki: 20
Koudu: 60
Hoho: 15
Soul Shards: -450
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Post by Zephyrin on Feb 28, 2013 17:53:06 GMT -5
b]Ability Name:[/b] Black Commandment: Soul Rend Power/Parameter: Bankai Flavor Description:The strongest of Zephyrin's Bankai abilities. Black Commandment makes Zephyrins' Zanpakto burst into black fire. The attack starts once he lands a blow. No matter the severity of the wound, the mark begins glowing black even though the sword is no longer in contact with the body. After this, an area the size of the wound first inflicted cuts even farther into the opponents body until it is then glowing on the other side. After this the wound makes a sharp ringing noise and engulfs the opponent in a deadly ball of black and blue fire. Mechanical Description: 40% HiekiDrawback:Can only be used once a battle and adds three fatigue counters. Read more: bleachrp.boards.net/thread/8/ability-template#ixzz2MEilZVuv |
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Post by Okuma on Feb 28, 2013 18:28:09 GMT -5
This needs a mechanical description.
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Zephyrin
Roleplayer
10th Division Captain
"Servitas Vitae, be seeing you."
Posts: 14
Race: Shinigami
Tier: E-1
Reiatsu: Strong
Seishin: 10
Budo: 20
Heiki: 20
Koudu: 60
Hoho: 15
Soul Shards: -450
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Post by Zephyrin on Feb 28, 2013 18:36:18 GMT -5
Oops...Either forgot or accidently deleted that column T_T
Here, I'll edit that in.
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Post by Okuma on Feb 28, 2013 18:52:39 GMT -5
20% Heikei is not that much. This sounds like a finisher ability and you have it giving 3 fatigue counters with a one time use. I think somewhere around 35-40% would be fair.
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Zephyrin
Roleplayer
10th Division Captain
"Servitas Vitae, be seeing you."
Posts: 14
Race: Shinigami
Tier: E-1
Reiatsu: Strong
Seishin: 10
Budo: 20
Heiki: 20
Koudu: 60
Hoho: 15
Soul Shards: -450
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Post by Zephyrin on Feb 28, 2013 18:55:44 GMT -5
Alright, added.
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